Tuesday, August 18, 2009

Language: My writing Experience

I enjoy writing essays that involve creative writing. Mostly like stories to pass the time. I have currently published a couple of my stories on a site where everyone can read. Most of my stories were failures, but i have made one or two that passed and was favored by over 10 people in.....a couple of months. i hate writing an essay based off notes that i take during class because those types of typing makes me so sleepy and i have no motivation to finish it. some of my writing goals are to furthrmore, publish a book in the future that will be as big seller as Stephan King without the horror. Maybe by then, my imagination and my vocabulary will be more vivid and more fluent to being key to writing better.


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  1. lsueokaSaturday, September 12, 2009

    Hi Joseph,

    Where are your stories published? Sounds interesting…
    And I see your point about writing essays based on notes you take in class…I imagine that you may have to do some of those in this class, though, so apologies in advance ;>

    Here are my comments on your writing pre-assessment: You’ve got some great details there for a pretty strong first draft. To strengthen the writing, you’d first need to decide on a single focus. Right now, there are several—1) your nervousness on attending a new school and your making a new friend and 2) your feeling that summer was being wasted stuck in summer school. Either one would work, but would also need more development.

    For your idea bank: Nice job on your idea bank…you were able to gather specific, sensory details about your experiences and the places in which they occurred

    mrs s

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